Hello guys!
Here is my latest personal project.
Her name is Aesha. The young Jedi Padawan.
“Let the Force be my guidance”
Dont forget to give your honest feedback so I can improve myself in next project
Cheers.
Dont forget to give your honest feedback so I can improve myself in next project
I like her lips, lip gloss I’d guess. Joe
Great style, i like it ! Good work 
My only real crit here is that the boots look like they are about 30 sizes too big, and are the wrong shape. Make them smaller, and with better shape to fit the legs.
Nice work… cool pose
its a nice pic 4 stars from me. Some things you might want to work on that hair she has a nice toony face but oh lord that hair. something closer to the clone war cartoon style hair would be sweet in my opinion the other thing is the boots i would agree with what has already been said in this regard plus the textures you need a little grit and dirt to spice things up Stars characters are never clean every thing feels lived in and that universe.
But its still a good piece of work and thank you for actually taking the time to pose your character I often see far too many works where the character is just left in a t-pose.
Heeheheh actually I dont know how to work with the lips texture. So I just add the new material for the lips and play it with the specular.
Thanks man,still need to improve about style/modeling.
Thanks,I will not realize if you didn’t mention it.
Simple pose I think :D, Thanks anyway.
LOL yeah! But in the middle of progress, my mood suddenly disappear. So I didn’t put much effort with the hair. But dont worry, I already add some particle hair. And by the way I dont know…something goes wrong when I add normal map on the boots,coz I used Area Light as the fill light. It looks like awkward so I just add the normal map of clouds and make it about 0.001
Here you go!
ah that looks loads better with the new hair style great form throughout, i especially like the face, reminds me quite alot of the cartoon star wars. would love to see the wires for the model
Modeling looks good, but it’s a shame you didn’t use any textures.
Also, how is she a “young” padawan when she looks to be practically an adult, and typically padawans are considerably younger than that if I’m not mistak-- oh god why do I know this?
I can’t believe that face was hidden under all that hair in your first post. The particle hair is a definite improvement I think PlantPerson has a point she looks a bit old to be a padawan. Her face looks young enough in the teenage 18-19 range so I would just slim her bust line down a bit and the thighs too. But his(PlantPerson) first point is really the most important one you need textures on this those texture are ruining a very fantastic model
Soooooo much better with the new hair! Some nice texturing would really make a big difference too!
OoO something I just noticed that’s kind of bothering me is that the lightsaber tips aren’t rounded of, they seem just like a flat surface when it should be more like this:
but that’s really all, It looks amazin’
Great modeling! I’d recommend putting a bit more time into presentation though, she reads a bit plastic-y. Really cool though 
This last version is incredible. I like the hair, good modelling and pose. Some details in boots will be nice.