Android in a tube(update july 4th)

Here is a scene im working on.
Update below

Im still thinking what to put on the scene.

any C&C

We need a bigger picture i cant make out any details at all.
If you need hosting email me the pic at [email protected]
and pls dont add me to your chain letters if you get them.

:expressionless: I posted that pic because it took like 3 hrs to render.

But sometime today I’ll have a bigger render

Then email me the blend file i have a render farm i use to render so it will be np for me to do.

DUDE! Look what did this weekend! Coincidence?

http://www.inkndoodles.com/elysiun/steve-stasisNTSC.jpg

How did you do your bubbles?

I made an update. Well I still need work on the guy and on the scene as a whole.See pic on first post

C&C

That’s good!
Active Ray Transp on crystal. :Z

It looks like the “bubbles” were made using procedural wood texture on a ray transp surface.

Hi heres another update. I took the glass tube away just for the test it kills the render and it makes the render 100 longer.

So any critcs are welcome.
Update below

:expressionless: its supposed to be Ice on the glass.

heres a new update http://gallery.mudpuddle.co.nz/albums/public/test4.sized.jpg
any C&C

I find the knocked over gas tanks a little distracting from the scene as a whole. Maybe if they weren’t so bright blue or if they were in a different location.

I made the color darker and they dont jump out at all.

So heres the latest update
http://gallery.mudpuddle.co.nz/albums/public/test6big.sized.jpg

any C&C???

hey this is really great stuff,
not sure why things are knocked over though, do you have a story that goes along with this,
are these models you made on your own or the make human things
your picture is very nice so i hesitate to make any suggestions, i can only tell you what i would do if it were my project
*the tubes that come from under the table (top right) seem to go no where they just end, i would have them go somewhere or just come out a little then tuck them under the table
*your models are great, and I would zoom in on them I can hardly see the detail on them, and it seems to be some empty space to work with, so thats what I would do make them more of a focus, and zoom in and crop out lots of the space and detail on the left and right.
http://www.home.earthlink.net/~simpletoon/o.jpg

how funny coincidence… i’ve been doinn a scene with similar idea for a couple days now… it only contains badly damaged cyborg head in the jar tough.

very nice setting.

This is really starting to look nice! Can’t wait till I see it finished!

I have model everything on the scene including the Android/Guy, no scripts, the guy is just a modify version of the android ;). But I did a lot of changes on the guy.
The Tubes are something that I really need to fix. I just been neglecting them.

thanks for all of the comments. Hope to put something new soon

Thanks guys!!

here is another update hope you like it
http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v334/isaacf82/ArtificialLove.jpg

Looks good but the floating menus look to much like floating picture frames.
Make them more translucent and your golden.

I really like the feel of the scene BTW
I just think the tube could use some ice on the outside.
Maybe some build up at the bottom and top and some ice falling.