Anim: 'Snack Time' , 3d+2d - cartoon style

Hi all.

Animation is my hobby and passion. Since some time I’m working on this project and now I think it’s the right time to show you some of it. Project is called Snack Time and it’s cartoon style 3d+2d. I will appreciate any comment that will help improve this project as well as any other critique. I will try to update it as often as possible.

Here’s animatic: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWZ2o_3yJ7k&feature=youtu.be

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Here’s first a part of whole film from viewport: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WCSqo0cSCjA

Cheers




There’s pretty much nothing I can critique on right now. Looking Superb!

Loving the look. Waiting to see more.

Thanks guys.
To make the whole project easier to deal with I split it for parts.
Here’s the link to the 2nd part of this film. It’s still under the work but it’s worth to see.

I had to know what’s the total time for this short (music guy was asking me for that), so I know already its gonna be 90 sek film plus another 20-30 sek for title and ending text, not much as for at least 6 months of working.
Here’s 3th part, only the first scene has animation ready to render, the rest is still under the work.

a wee test of jake’s action in slow motion in turn around

2 scenes I was working recently, some slow and some fast motion

I’d suggest a few variations on the bird when flying. It looks ‘too’ cartoony. Thanks for sharing.

I like it a lot! Nice work! :yes:

I’d like to share with you whole story which is still under the progress but will give you a great idea what is all about. Some action, timing, cameras need to be update. Because there is a lot to be fix I would like to hear from you what do you think about all story and if you got any ideas how to improve it or something is too annoying to your eyes, now is right time to speak. Next step I’ll show will be a ready film in about 6 weeks time.
First part of this short has been rendered and added to link just to show what you can expect.
Cheers.

ps. Drawingisdead - seagull flight was animated through IK and FK so i think I wont do too much to make it less cartoony but I will try to do so, cheers

it took me longer than I expected to finish this scene, so I’ve done video about composition, hope u like it :slight_smile:

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I had a wee brake, but the project is still a life. I had to change all cameras to be more stiff and render them again and here’s new scene. Cheers


Here’s another update


Cheers

slowly but surely


after a wee break i am coming back with some updates





cheers

I am very happy how grease pencil works now for 2d effects

Yes, I finally finished this short and if you haven’t seen it yet, here’s the link

Cheers