Animation in progress...

Hi! I’m working o na short Blender animation. On a first glance, how do you like it?

Enhanced lighting and grass.

I feel that the way he is holding the newspaper looks fake. It doesn’t look like his fingers are bent. Also, he has his arms stretched in front of him and the newspaper far from his face. I think people hold newspapers closer to their face and have their elbows bent.

The fingers are bent, it’s just not noticable due to lighting.

And also the arm position is fixed on the second image. :slight_smile:
EDIT: it’s only low-poly in preview for faster viewing (this is a screenshot from cycles preview). In final render it looks better of course.

How do you like the main character? :slight_smile: