Another Sad Night in the Window

Hey guys first thime that i upload something! i hope you like! if not please feel free to comment!!

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I like the feel of this image. Only two little things the flower looks a bit flat could use a little bending in the petals. The wall texture looks a lot like concrete to me. Maybe turn the bump or normal down a smidge unless it is concrete then disregard.

I totally agree with Anita’s suggestions and assessing.

Nice work!

paolo

Great work!!! Congrats!!! :wink:

I like the feeling of this image.

Haven’t been HERE in many moons …right off the bat…a really nice image…clean and simple…a place where most of us have been at some point…i thought off a child’s paper flower… the star field seems too dense.??..so…i like it …thanks for sharing …have fun…keep up the good work…and…though i’m barely a member…Welcome to BA…

It looks so cold, grey and deserted, beautiful depiction of sadness, gloom and depression. I agree that the wall texture is too rough unless you offset it with some peeling wallpaper or other wall covering. The glass seems to have frost on it, maybe the flower should be dead. I really love the mood and the lighting.

great work! you have captured that spooky scary feeling, love it

Fantastic image! If it were mine would had added a subtle tough of colour to the flower, but that’s just personal preference.

great job!:slight_smile:

Very atmospheric render! Only the flower seem a bit flat.

good … thank you very much for your answers … I appreciate them very much …

the image has great significance to me … Flower me … the environment is the world 3d … I’m from Venezuela … 3d design does not exist here … I’m the only designer 3d of my state … so the flower in an empty room … the flower is placed on the light side and still not dead because I’m fighting for one day out of the room to follow my dreams … move out of country … meet other designers share experiences … that is the feeling of being alone in a world where your dreams you can not share with anyone … sorry for my English … My native language is Spanish. thank you very much again for your answers! …