I like the overall idea of the image especially the hair, its sometimes too easy to just skimp on the hair. You on the other hand went all out to capture that wet look that works soo well.
I am however going to say that the image has some flaws, I want to be very careful not to upset you here so stop reading if you don’t want a Critique.
The reason that I want to do this is that I also tried to create a Disney style inspired character and at first created a face that was very odd looking but could not see how odd it was until I stepped away from the project for a while.
Its really interesting that the face you created suffers from the same odd look that mine did. The character lacks a snout “for lack of a better word” the mouth and nose are too far back giving the face a flat baby look. Humans don’t have a very pronounced snout compared to other animals but we do have one.
The lips are a bit too OTT “over the top”. Its a weird thing, I too used to think female lips = big lips but in reality smaller lips are more feminine. Its the very subtle shape that gives lips a female appearance rather than their size. Just look at how small and petite the lips are on the characters from frozen. LINK
The eyes are one of the biggest things on a Disney character in more ways than one so you need to get them right. On your render the eyes are one of the weakest elements. They lack the whites that make the eyes pop and they lack the glossy shine that creates that O-so important highlight.
I have included an image and Blend for the eyes I used on my character so that you can see the subtle details you need to capture.
Finally the color/composition of your shot is a little bland. You need to think about the color wheel, red, green and blue are the three main colors of your shot . RGB work so well together for obvious reasons. You need to push each of thous colors so that they appose each other and create contrast and interest in your shot.
I have done a rough Photoslop paint-over to illustrate what I am talking about:
Anyways, I hope you recognize from the amount of time I have put into this post that I am only trying to help. I only wish that others would spend as much time Critiquing.
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