Hello. 
Almost have this entry ready to go with 7 days left to enter.
Hopefully the story is obvious, if it isn’t please let me know and I will see what I can do about making it clearer.
A couple of things I am not happy with atm, is the astronaut and the atmospheric ring around the earth (Any suggestions on how I can fix it would be much appreciated ).
Please leave some constructive criticism and/or suggestions, that would be very much appreciated - thanks