The sky looks pretty bad actually. And the thing that makes this image hard to look at are the poses. They are very unnatural. U should really tweak them. Other than that good job.
to me it looks like you have created the model and just put them in to create a render. I think you need to plan an interesting image from the beginning with composition and story. Even if deciding for this scene, this cannot be the most dramatic camera angle. If you were a photographer there, where would you go? Which image would you take? And now that you can also tell them to do anything, what would be the most interesting image?
Thanks for the feedback. I´ll post an update soon taking into consideration all your comments.
