so… was tweaking the project and heard some feedback, and decided to make a SFWier version from this piece. trying to not bordering soft porn this time.
This may not be a popular opinion, but I have to say I think the new one looks MUCH better, and I don’t see what other people are seeing in the original. I mean, sure I saw the boobs, and yes they were wet and in a tight clingy shirt, but they looked… well, comical, not sexy. The wet t-shirt just didn’t hang right, and was trying way too hard. A bikini or nude would’ve probably worked better for the original image. I liked the darker hair better though.
The dry shirt hangs much more naturally, and the character comes through better.
Apologies if what I said came across as harsh. You definitely are genuinely skilled, I just think your skills show better in this newer version. I was just surprised that people would say that was the better image. Artistically this one is genuinely the better image - the composition even looks more balanced with the looser shirt, and this shirt is also better modeled. Plus I assumed you were also of the opinion the original wasn’t working since you said you made this version in response to feedback.
And again, I think this one looks good. She feels more real here. More like a person. And it’s less tropey.
MichaelColina
(The "Mr. Polygon Punisher" is your)
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no i mean his previous post with nsfw, not yours here darn it xD