I’m no character artist but I think it looks promising, however I think the skins base tone is too pale and the color variation is way too strong. It’s a young boy so maybe you wanted it look like he had smeared color all over himself, if that is the case you should add some to the rest of the clothes as well, otherwise you need to dial it way down IMO.
Thank you, Nosslak, the point here is the interaction of sss and color map. The former was hardly saturated. And also a hard post- adjustments. Thanks its exactly what i need now - im working on it 20 hours a day for a week strain and stop noticing things.