Given the subject matter, it seems appropriate to ask for focused critique. I made this one for this weekend’s Blender Weekend Competition (499.7). The theme is “focus”.
I used Blender Internal and did the standard DOF rig in the node editor. I tried to put a few dents in the instruction sheet where the bolts are and make it look like the sheet is folded up, so I don’t mean for it to be levitating or something. Let me know if that doesn’t come across correctly. Thanks for any other input you can give me on how to improve.
I was surprised how well this image compresses in jpg. I was able to drag the quality down in the 1920x1080 image to 25 before noticing anything and the file size was only 52KB. Usually I can’t go below 50 before starting to see major things wrong. This one is a lower res higher quality version just in case it is noticable.