BWC - Causa Mortis - Completed

Thanks to everyone for the tips! They are being very important to me.

I found the great idea of Odeas, the helmet down and the light passing through the hole! Unfortunately I have to make changes to the scene that I did not have time to do! Time is very short for me! I could miss the deadline!

I worked the best textures, still did not like blood! I changed the color of the helmet, the green was very alive, as Brookesy.

gallardo, the idea is to make a mixture that, the shape of the German helmet recalls, but the inscription “A.R.M.Y” is only an analogy. These are abbreviations, not just in english army. I think the war none of the sides are good.

But here’s wip

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d88/Mako-san/BWC/wip019.jpg

Criticism and suggestions?

thanks again

byyeeeeee

You improved it very much since the first one !
The color composition is superb and the blur adds a little sad touch.

However, I’d change the camera’s position. I’d lower it so we see the road, just to have some perspective.

Keep it up !

good work Mako, just my little opinion, maybe you can tweak more on the blood color. do you want it to be fresh blood or dry blood. both certaintly have diferent color. for me it looks like a paint color at the moment :slight_smile:

why you modelled a germans WWII helmet with “A.R.M.Y” written on it … wouldn’t it be better to make a US helmet ? cool idea anyways :slight_smile: but iam with leFaquin … why not lower the camera and show us a bit of what happened here …

Thank you again for the tips!

Unfortunately I have very little free time to work, then could not show something in the scenario, would require a more complex modeling (and also ideas to fill the scenario hehe).

As for the German helmet and ARMY, is an analogy to the army in general, not extamente a country. A mix, where no matter which side in the end everything is war.

Well here vai the last update. I hope you enjoy.

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d88/Mako-san/BWC/wip021.jpg

I have a doubt, my image here is even finished? The organization is in charge of the BWC uses it to a vote? Or I have to post the work completed somewhere?

hugs and thanks!

Definitely a contender.
But dried blood is more brown than red.
If it’s fresh, I’d go with crimson (darker red) and more of it.

hiii

Thank you Neostarlight…

rather the coagulated blood is darker, near the brown …
Brown was not exactly the good, but I think that the tone was slightly darker better!

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d88/Mako-san/BWC/wip022.jpg

Criticism and suggestions?

byeee!!!

Forgive my ignorance, but is a military helmet made of metal or a plastic fiber?

This one appears to be metal, but a plastic would break where this one bends.

In this I am inspired by helmets of war II, were made of metal, today should be made of a special fiber.

You referred the ends as in the front?

I refer to the edges around the bullet hole.
But it appears you have it well in hand here.

EDIT: are you using SSS?

For its observation, changed the width of the metal in extremities, such as helmets were made of sheets of metal, I think it should be thinner!

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d88/Mako-san/BWC/wip023.jpg

I am not using SSS not only standard and shaders ray mirror.

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d88/Mako-san/BWC/shaders.jpg

Ended!

Thank you to all the advice and tips! It was good competition and also participate in the learning! I wish luck to all competitors.

http://files.myopera.com/zenryoku/albums/48582/wip024_Final.jpg

The work should be completed even posted here? Or should I refer to another place?

hugging!

Picture in high resolution

http://files.myopera.com/zenryoku/albums/48582/Causa_Mortis_BWC.jpg

hugs