Catch the Moon! (and Mind of a Genuis)

Hi all,

A little project I worked on for a day or so, loosley based on the Flatten It! challenge at Dark Scarab, where all objects in the scene can only be in two dimensions. It could be much better, so I probably won’t enter it in the competition, but i’ll call it finished now.

Mind of a Genuis


Critiques/comments welcome.

Sam

Another image, using the same rules.

Catch the Moon


Sam

this is good but the moon could be better done

yeah, make the moon better, but the rest is great. :D…

What exactly is wrong with the moon? Any tips on how to make it better?

Thanks,
Sam