Hey , I had’nt realized that it was you that also make this post :
What I say there apply to projects that tries to match quality standards we used to see , in your case it’s a bit different and you can actually pull off something in a short amount of time.
If you have time to add sound and music it will help a lot to get into the story.
All that said, even if the framing could be improved it’s nice, timing and editing is also good.
About the dialogs sadly I don’t understand everything because I’m not a native english speaker, but anyway it’s fun to watch. All that said I may not watch the entire movie once it’s released…