Cherries [Not original content ]

Hi guys…!

I just finished making cherries by following the tutorial : youtube link

What do you guys think?
C&C are welcome :slightly_smiling_face:

You can find my art blunders here : https://myblunders101.wordpress.com/blender-3d/

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It’s not perfect but you finished a tutorial to the end. Just keep on doing stuff. :+1:

Thank you @BigBlend. Can you tell me what needs to be improved here… is it material of cherries or lighting ? Appreciate your feed back.

I’ll try to break it down a bit.

The leaf looks like a texture on a plane instead of a real looking leaf, also too small. The stem has this stretched looking texture or procedural look to it. The drops are in an unnatural pattern and are somewhat too big. The lightning is good and the shader on the cherry is also good.

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Thank you so much for your feedback… It helps lot.

I will say that the shape is a bit off too. I did some testing myself to model a cherry by looking at google images. You can look in my blend file if you want just to see the shape I have done.

cherry.blend (619.6 KB)

I will look into the blend file. I like the stem too, it came out so natural, now I can see how crappy the stem I have created. Thank you again :blush: