Hi guys
Here is a clone i am working on. i have not made a belt yet but i would like some feedback on things i could improve ect.
Thanks in advance
Are you going to animate it, or just pose it?
It looks like a good start, with the belt and maybe a few more details it will be shweet.
dunno what it is but the proportions don’t look “right” maybe it’s that his torso is too long or probably just that his legs are too short or skinny. Perhaps you can experiement with the proportions some more
Yes i will animate this character i have already created a nice rig for him. also i know the proportions are a bit off but i can not work out why.
his hips/waist is too narrow, I would increase the circumfrence. Then size up the leg, etc.
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The torso does look a bit too long and the feet may even be a bit short. I looks like he’s got no butt either. The helmet may be a little long also.
I like clone troopers.
His torso looks like a barrel.
Might want to reshape it a bit.
Yea, I’m with Hobo Joe. There is something missing or not quite right in the torso area.
The torso is still a bit long. When the arms come down the hands should be just about mid thigh. A little higher than mid thigh. Right now it looks as if the hands would be on the hips if the arms were brought down.
Vitruvian Man is a good reference for proportions. You could use it to tweak the armor here and there. The breastplate should probably only come down to the bottom of the ribs and the waist armor should probably come down to just above the hips. And feet are about as long as the forearm, so this guys feet look short. He does have some butt now though.
When I saw this I thought EXACTLY what Hobo Joe wrote - his chest looks like a barrel. Yes, his torso is too long, and it is too round. Give the armor some contours.
here is a quick walkcycle i have done just put it on loop to watch
here is the link
http://www.filefactory.com/file/423aab
lookin awesome
too hard to tell (for me; lack of knowledge) what needs tweaking, so good job. now put him in an epic pose!
Yea looks good. I have never completed a good walkcycle but this one looks good. but it does look like he bounces a little too much each step. Maybe try and make it a little smoother.