Deferred Pay: Two logo animations help needed

I need help getting these logos (one of the concept studios logos & the feature film logos), to look like something below. Anyone want to help? We have some really amazing things going on between now and Spring of 2016 which is when we plan to start principle shooting.

You can see the template I used for my logo here…but its way off. You can also see the movie logo I did very quickly. Not to the standard I want. I have some very promising proposals coming soon. I need some amazing logo work.