What do you think of my parody of cereal advertisments, made with blender?
It’s lacking in a few things. Number one, the actual name of the cereal. At least, create a made up name on the box. The animation is good, but at least have a narrator telling the viewer about the product. The third and final thing is you might want to change your angle on the final shot. If you move the camera at an angle and add some things that makes it a “part of a balance breakfast”, you will have more of an impact.
Yes, i’ll try and make final shots that have stronger impact in my next videos. Thank you for your feedback.