Eavan

My latest creation,
Eavan


Thank you for your time.

Hehe! Nice! Other views might help to see him better, now the light is too soft to make out the shape. For example, I am not sure what’s up with his nose, but there is a funny shadow on it. The eyes need to be turned to the sides just a tiny bit (like real human eyes (see MRI image)), otherwise he appears to be looking at the tip of his nose :slight_smile:

Hair start a way too low too… forehead needs to be bigger.

Clothes are a way too lowpoly, it looks a bit like he is dressed in paper.

Just keep working and you’ll get there! :slight_smile:


Thanks for the critique, I’ll need to watch out where I start the hairline next time, as well as make sure that lighting has a bit more contrast to better emphasize the forms of the character.