Ember

http://www.2and2.net/Uploads/Images/ember.jpeg
please c&c and help improve (at last something that looks at least a tiny bit animelike)

First of all, try turning OSA on at least 8 at the Render menu. Then, try modelling some fingers. Oh yeah, I may not be a girl, but I do know that those boobs are a little… spherical?

Try turning the specularity down on her skin, looks plasticy.

Nice job with the hair! How did you do it?

Looks fair overall.

the hair?..that’s just a plane that i formed a bit to the shape of the head and then fract-subdivided :-? not too smart

http://img81.exs.cx/img81/9346/ember1.th.jpg
http://img81.exs.cx/img81/9080/ember2.jpg
http://img81.exs.cx/img81/1995/ember3.jpg
http://img81.exs.cx/img81/5349/ember4.jpg
http://img81.exs.cx/img81/532/ember5.jpg
http://img81.exs.cx/img81/373/ember6.jpg
http://img81.exs.cx/img81/1344/ember7.jpg[/img]
as you can see i really like to show her legs! well they did come up pretty sexy! :smiley: