Eye Test + BWC entry WIP

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/593/headdownshot.jpg

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9006/headdownthreefourth.jpg

Rendered In Blender…SO MUCH TO DO!!!

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4899/dramanthreefourth2f1.jpg

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2025/dramanthreefourthf1.jpg

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/442/dramanthreefourthbackf1.jpg

really good work

awesome monster!

incredible render!

In my humble opinion the skin is a bit overdone, looks like it’s too bumpy and, most of all, it’s not like a skin of any real creature.
I would advise to get a look similar to a reptile or an ape skin… something like that, you know.

Ooh,just a minute…I have to find my jaw!

Thanks I agree, When I did a normal map all those details were lost :frowning: I could spend hours making it look like reptile skin (which I did, Hours of work to find the normal map didn’t get all my details) It got some.

So instead I’m going to use it as a guide, when I’m in the coloring stage. Can’t wait for that.:smiley:

For the rest who commented

I really appreciate all the comments.

THANK YOU!!!

awesome stuff aven! I especiallly dig your concept art!

Only comment I have right now that you may stick closer to your concept concerning the stiches around the mouth: you planned the thread much thicker and only few stiches. I think that looks much better than the current version. From a distance, you can also barely see the seam atm…

Good luck!

Awesome work. You’re drawings are amazing. You model is looking good too. The only crits I have on that is that the edge flow is terrible. Though, for a still frame image, it probably wont be a big problem =)
I would agree that I prefer the thicker/fewer sutures from your concept.

Comments Accepted and done :yes: Thanks!!!

I really don’t know if I’ll be able to finish in time for the contest but even though, I’m still going to keep working on this.

originally there’s only two people, the antagonist (Draman) and the protagonist (Jack) in the scene.

Well, Here’s a quick update on both of them, I still haven’t started on the background:o ( Man I’m slow, but of coarse this is my first blender work. So the more I do the faster I’ll get :))

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7196/dramanthreefourth.jpg

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7061/dramanfront.jpg

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8282/dramanface.jpg

And Here’s Jack, YES she is a girl My story will explain but that’s later.

All done in Blender: It’s just a quick box modeling. hands and arms need work and everything else. I’m keeping most of a comic style so realistic yet not

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/4679/jackbodyfront.jpg

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/3599/jackbodyback.jpg

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/3016/jackheadfront.jpg

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8621/jackheadside.jpg

not bad! but why do you post zbrush screenshots?

So you can see wire frame and it’s much quicker no cameras no lights needed.
And I got use to it :smiley: (hehehehehe!)

Final will be in blender.

P.S THANKS!

ok!

check the ear, is too small :wink:

really awesome monster, but there’s something wrong with the proportions of jack … her head and arms are too small IMO … the face will come out good i can see …