Female Assasin WIP Update


(Bapsis) #1

Hey all,
Got most of the body done now, still have to sew together her armpits and back of the shoulder. Once iv finished modeling the body up to the neck i have to add the finer details like glove and boot detail and a utility belt.
Any comments for refinement would be muchly appreciated, i really want this one to turn out sweet. Anywayz…wachoothink??? :wink:

http://www.stormpages.com/bapsis/fra.html

Cheers,
Matt

Blend on, and blend well!!!


(blengine) #2

pretty nice, but lots of weird areas… the boobs look a lil too close and are pointed a little too strate… the 6 pack makes the stomach area look too flat… the crotch area bumps out too much for a female =) knee caps are way too small, arms look really nice! do u have a reference pic next to u as u are modeling? looking at one could really help with getting the right proportions… its looking really awesome!, what kind of head are u gonna give her? i love the assasin style so far =)


(BgDM) #3

Nice work Bapsis. Coming together nicely. Do as imgrandpaboy says. There are some problem areas.

Still trying to find time to get you some info on reflections too :wink: Just hang on, it’s coming.

BgDM


(Bapsis) #4

Hey 'gain,
Thanks for those critiques grandpaboy, and bgdm. I made a few changes so far, with the breasts abbs and crotch (didnt know how to make a female crotch, figgured i would just make it out of a box snicker). :wink:
Also threw in the head, tho it looks a bit funny cause its not EXACTLY alligned right, and because its not sewn to the trapizious shoulder muscles that dont exist yet. :o) I havnt used a reference pic at all through out modeling this, all 100% imaginational brain strain.

http://www.stormpages.com/bapsis/fra.html

Anywayz, thanks for the posts and coments, keep 'em commin! I will update again in the future with more shots as she comes along. :wink:

Matt

Blend on, and blend well!!!


(BgDM) #5

The head looks a little maleish. I think it is the jawline that is doing it. Soften it up and you will be there.

BgDM


(Bapsis) #6

Good call on the jaw line, hows that…

http://www.stormpages.com/bapsis/fra.html

Cheers,
Matt

Blend on, and blend well!!!


(blengine) #7

nice nice! looking alot better… better boobs =) i think the head looks like its in perfect position, and the fixed jawline makes her alot more feminine…the abs still a lil flat but its no big deal…great going. pop in some armpits and a neck 8)


(S68) #8

Nice :slight_smile:

boobs are still looking funny…

Stefano


(SimonHK) #9

Do you have access to some real boobs to study closely… :smiley: