Hi guys, I wanna show you my latest work. I was downloading some free models of cars for assets library and I found this nice litlte car. I spent some time with texturing and creating materials are here is the result. Hope you like it. Comments and critiques are welcome
It looks good in general but… it looks like a toy car. Something in the focus, distortion,… makes me think that it’s a little size car. is it on purpose?
By the way, the “wet texture” looks too vertical. The water streaks look like vertical columns. I think they should be more chaotic.
good job with the modeling,just the lighting kinda ruins the render to be honest. you could make that car look way better. as example the front light is a bit to strong, it looks just unnatural.
Looking at the grain of the asphalt IMO the texture is mapped too much big so the car looks very small.
Also there is too sharp passing from wet to dry (look at the right down corner for example).
The sidewalk looks a bit “dangerous” without any barrier that prevents kids to fall down.
But the main thing are those water stripes on the car’s body.
I find them not only unpleasing for the eyes
but also wrong since the raindrops and water that genereated them went fully vertical ignoring car’s lines.
This is how a wet car should look like in my opinion.
