First Attempt at Animation [Feedback Needed]

Artwork Animations
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Hi there, I am starting an master degree in multimedia, and I would like to get some feedback from you guys, you have alot more experience than me, and I want to know more if possible.

I will leave here the link to the video, already hosted at youtube.

I added some video, the purpose is to have somekind of animation :stuck_out_tongue:

Any comments are welcome !
Thanks alot in advance for the forum :wink:

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You have some issues mainly to do with spacing, but it’s hard to critique it in this form.
Lose the camera move and credits and add a frame counter and you will get better advice.

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YouTube seems to be dropping frames, too. I’ve watched it three times and it’s slightly different each time. You may want to look into a Vimeo account for publishing your works in progress.

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Thanks alot for your feedback, I will make some changes, my professor told me some advices about the camera too. If I want to capture the motion, I can’t change alot, like you said freen.
Also didn’t know about that Orinoco, the frames loss .

Thanks alot again, I will post it again, when I have a new version.

Thanks for this space too :wink:

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Also I would want to let the ball go a bit further. Having it stop just half way looks a bit unnatural.