Here is my first submitted blender product. It sux, i know. Please critique it!
Thanks in advance!
Sorry, i didn’t know it wouldn’t work…
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Sorry again
You have to begin somewhere…is this one of your first model?
it isn’t my first model, but my harddrive crashed on my old computer so most of my work was deleted, and this was something i did just for fun.
that’s not too bad. playing with particles already eh?
try using the halo texture on the material button and add a marble texture to the halo. it will look more like clouds/wind then.
BgDM
Not bad…
my suggestionis to lower alpha, decrease hardness, increase size, listen to BgDM and render a bigger image.
Welcome aboard.
Stefano
here is a revised edition=
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I added the marble texture and i added a wider, shorter cone at the base. Decreasing the hardness made it look worse, no offense. so I didn’t do that, but the rest should be better
1st off, I stole BgDM’s name, now you steal MINE?!
2nd, Angelfire sucks!
3rd, give your pretty little tornado a scene!!!
1st off, I stole BgDM’s name
Oh, so now you finally admit it!!! 
BgDM
I did not steal your name! there is no 3 or a g in mine. it stands for blender man dan!