Before you start painting, you might want to extend the right side to the right a bit more. She’s sitting right in the center of the composition now. Also part of the highlight on her left forearm is in the shadow of her left knee (ie: shouldn’t have a highlight.) You’ve got a nice drawing, good mood and I really don’t see anything off with the perspective.
I cleaned up the rest of the shading (I got your thing with the forearm, orinoco :p) and I might try painting it now. I know she’s in the middle of the picture, btw, but it’s a portrait.
Hee hee hee. I don’t know what a Tone Map is, but if thats what gives it that oil painting effect thingy, howdja do it? I reaaaaaallly like that tone map thing i think.