Freestyle one minute short animation

Here’s a short film I made as an exercise in an animation course. It’s my first time using freestyle.
Some may find it a little bit weird, but it is actually based on the true story of an uncle of mine who bought a smelly ticket
and he begun thinking about crocodiles.

The artistic styling is very unique. However, it falls a bit short on the walk cycle and traveling through a portal at the end to me.

Yeah, the walking is kind of robotic and exaggerated, i had mixed feelings about it, because it made sense for the character to have sort of a marching walking style, but this was on the verge of too muchness “tuti fruti bubalu”, if that makes sense.