<–click to see him big.
Modeled and Rendered in Blender(Blender internal)
Looks like a greasy dude. Must’ve been a hell of an accident.
The model isn’t too bad. The skin (looking at the non-fried half) feels a bit off. The hair looks odd, as well. Some of them are coming out of his eyelids.
When making WiP renders, it might be a good to have the background contrast your model a bit more. In this case, since the hair is so dark, try rendering a light background. It’ll be easier to give accurate critique of your model.