Game Asset - Simple Turret

Artwork Works in Progress
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Helloo!

This is my first somewhat serious project.
I’m working on a machine gun turret for a game. The plan is to make it high poly and then bake all that detail to a low poly model.
Currently, I have a barrel/muzzle segment mostly finished, and have begun work on the main “body” (if that’s the right term to use.

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Critiques are most appreciated and welcome, otherwise how will I improve this, eh?

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Those edges look too sharp.

Otherwise, so far so good!

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Helloo, and thanks for the feedback!
Which edges are we talking about here? All of them or, for example, just the barrel (it hasn’t been smoothed yet) or the barrel cover?

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The barrel cover… mostly those pointy corners at the back end.

It really depends on what the rest of the gun will look like, though. Any updates?