Gundam Aerial Short Animation

Gundam Aerial Short Animation

Still learning ! Critics are highly appreciated !
I Notice that i am lacks in camera positioning, focal length, and many more. But your critics matter so much for my next improvement !

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Ok, you say Gundam so i put the like automatically… (big fan of Zaku Mark II and Gundam RX78 here, I admit that I can’t even recognize all the later models). I like your animation but i’m not the right person to give some advice on that field.

To me, the movements seem a little too slow and smooth. Perhaps look at the curves and timing of the key frames, then adjust those for a more mechanical feel. With more abrupt starts and stops.

However, floating in air and space would be fluid, so that seems fine in your animation.

For whatever my opinion is worth.

great work

if your looking to creat an anime like animation, thin you need to take down the FPS down to 12 frames , the animation is smooth and a little slow for an anime like scene .

i did a scene like that before ! its not that great though
cave escape0061-0109.mkv (673.0 KB)

but if your not aiming for that … than this looks great to me !