Yes… this is just a notice, that the final version is at the Finished Projects sections. So just forget about everything in this thread. Go give your comments elsewhere. Shoo. Shooo.
I really dig that bg pic too! Maybe u should use it as your consept?
Scene is bit empty now, girl is little stiff, scene lacks shadows and those shadows wich i can see is little hard edged for my taste, but pic have great potential. Keep it coming
looks good, so far. torches are a bit “sparkly”, like they’re burning phospherous (i think?), but gives the whole scene an air of enchantment, sort of…
it also looks like part of the girl is transperant. is she a ghost ?
Very cool, going along with what the others said, you might also (if you have her be a ghost), maybe make her somewhat luminate. She is somewhat hard to see, and makin the ghost glow would give it a little bit more.
1 the women is too dark
2 the fire on the torches look too unreal, they light too little, i think
3 her feet are very small
4 where did the light in the base of the right troch come from?
5 green doesn’t fit so well to the shields border
6 make the shields look more metallic
7 num 6 also for the axes
8 the shield and the axes look out of place, cuz everything except for them has a texturing that makes it look real
sorry if i was too harsh on the crits, i just fought with a girl-friend. however it’s very good
I think this picture is getting better and better. I like the redish shine you added, adds to the overall picture by making the character stand out more.
Paradox
1 the women is too dark
4 where did the light in the base of the right troch come from?
hippie responded:
Yes she is. I am working on that.
I don’t quite understand the question.
1 now i see the women
4 there’s a light at the base of the right torch. way down in the floor.
other crits:
1 her boobs r too big, they way tooo down, like if they were pamela anderson’s
2 one hand is blue and the other is yellow
3 her hips need to be a little lower, i guess, and it’s to thin for her boob proportion
4 now your flame in the torches look better, i know it has the same appeareance, but it looks better done.
5 the arms (shields and axes) look tilted
6 i like the rug
7 her left arm bicep is too big
8 her face is too thin
9 her shoulders are too high, like a man’s
10 sorry for i being so critic