Head with the start of a body_update: 21/7/05

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 3:20am

lol

i was in here about a month ago with a head i decided to remodel it as it was not wat i was looking for well here it is well its jsut a face at the mo

c&c
thanks

reaper

Alex_G · July 10, 2005, 3:37am

great start

it’s symmetrical I take it?

Put the subsurfacing up 1 more notch, you can tell the lowpoly around the nose.

Crits

=== Smooth this edge out a bit, his nose looks a bit too fat at the moment

===(light) Move this vertex out a little on the Y axis

=== There’s a fold here that shouldn’t be there

=== Give him (I think) a thicker lip

=== His eyes look pretty dead at the moment

===(dark) move these edges out a bit more, the same way as the nose vertex.

Also lighten it up a bit, and make him look a bit more front on.

(maybe I was a bit too critical, sorry!)

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 3:55am

nah its kl i will work on it i like having crits it allows me to get better in my work and to see where things are going wrong

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 4:30am

heres a small update

reaper

Alex_G · July 10, 2005, 4:43am

yep that looks better than before you nailed it still got a bit of a way to go though

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 4:48am

thanks
yeh i agree got a long way to go gotta add some face contours few wrinkly bits not to many tho lol

SmaTheGreek · July 10, 2005, 4:51am

Very good, the only thing I don’t like is the nose .I think it is a bit fat.Keep at it

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 5:03am

yeh first i was having truble witht he lips now i have got them sorted but the nose is all wrong i gotta sort that

SmaTheGreek · July 10, 2005, 5:09am

I don’t think it is a bad nose.I think it is a bit fat.However I don’t think it is nescessary to fix it.Just an opinion

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 5:30am

try this i have used a ref pic to try and get some better face contours

thanks reaper

SmaTheGreek · July 10, 2005, 5:34am

The nose is perfect.I think that they eye wrinkles are not very nise try changing their location or size

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 5:41am

Changed them already lol looked nasty

SmaTheGreek · July 10, 2005, 5:43am

That is better .Fix the ones near the nose.Hey please check my W.I.P .It is the Dinosaur head

anon41083106 · July 10, 2005, 8:30am

heres an update complete circle on the head now and the neck started

thanks

reaper

anon41083106 · July 20, 2005, 10:01am

well ive kinda updated this head it now has the start of a body in which still needs a lot of work especially… well everything lol

thanks

reaper

Alex_G · July 20, 2005, 3:07pm

That looks great, but I think the head is too big for the body

Cerberus · July 20, 2005, 3:41pm

The cheeks are a little too fat.

anon41083106 · July 21, 2005, 9:47am

thnaks guys yeh ive been trying to sort the scale out quite a lot the head is still a little to big and yes the checks are flat i need to make the part around the mouth pertrude a little bit more

anon41083106 · July 21, 2005, 11:28am

update: shrunk the head a little i think worked on the feet gave the shoes lace also made minor adjustments to neck and trousers

comments greatly appreciated

reaper