In general the start doesnt look bad. At first you should add even more detail, for example a few more buttons or printed texts on the camera, depending on your reference. At next you could also subsurf some of the round parts a bit more, because there are steps visible. The materials could then be further improved with scratches, fingerprints, etc… . Furthermore you should change the camera angle, so that the object is more centered and there is less empty space aroud it. The flooring material could be more glossy and the scaling for the texture seems wrong, the planks are to small in comparison to the camera. Also a few days ago there was this camera: Canon Canonet QL-17 in the featured list, you could maybe look there too. Good luck with your future work.
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