high Poly Uzi

Artwork Works in Progress
#1

Hello, I am new to this forum :smiley:

I have been modeling since November 2010 and I mainly create assets for games.

I am currently working on an Uzi , I believe the high poly version is just about done now, I will soon be baking it into low poly and texturing it, I will update you guys when I can.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12243880/12.jpg

I would post my previous work but it won’t let me lol.

#2

Hello, and welcome!

Not bad, but just one thing that bothers me; most of the uzi’s i’ve seen on the internet (and the one i’ve fired) have a butt. In real life this one would be very unwieldy, although i suppose for a game that might not be an issue. Still, think about it.

and maybe turn down the AO on it a little.

#3

For a slightly cartoonish game, it looks good. However, I can see you have improvised on the details rather than using references, which may or may not be a bad thing depending on what you’re aiming for…
Anyway, my only general suggestion would be to make the silencer shorter and a bit thicker (maybe reduce the space between gun and silencer)
Also, if your details have too sharp edges, they don’t bake too well in the normalmap.

#4

Well, without knowing what style of game you are aiming for, I cannot say in any clear detail - all up it does look very good, but as another poster pointed out, would only suit a cartoony game. The details are inaccurate; though I’m not an expert on Uzi’s in particular.
If, however, you are aiming for realism - then I’d suggest obtaining as many images as you possibly can; from as many different sources as you can.
That is what I do when I’m creating my WWII-era Australian weaponry models.
But, if unrealistic is what you’ve intended - in that case, I can’t really find any obvious faults. Good job!

#5

Any updates?

#6

Thanks for all the replys!

@Jorzi: I took your advice and made the edges a bit more loose, I also fixed the silencer by making it shorter and fatter.

About the origins of the gun: it’s not supposed to be a pin point accurate gun . It’s just meant to be a fun side project, for my portfolio, and maybe I will include it in an OSP

Here is a update on the uzi ( Still not textured ) I also included a wire frame shot

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12243880/1.jpg
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12243880/wireframe.jpg

#7

Sorry, it wouldn’t even let me post 2 links in the same post, so here are the wire frames: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12243880/wireframe.jpg