In Flight

SkyBlue77 · January 8, 2013, 1:45pm

Hi all, this is my current work in progress depicting a flying Ladybug.

XeroShadow · January 8, 2013, 4:15pm

Change the camera angle towards the ladybug’s face to make it a bit more dynamic. It looks good but a bit on the flat side.

Magnavis · January 8, 2013, 4:54pm

i agree with the post above but that plant stem…wow!

SkyBlue77 · January 8, 2013, 6:14pm

Thanks for the feedback so far, the changed camera angle does give more of a natural feel to the image.
Here is the updated image.

jrossjr79 · January 8, 2013, 8:09pm

The shading on the lady bug throws me a bit, but I agree with the third post, wow at that stem. Looks awesome.

Jake_Shadow · January 8, 2013, 10:02pm

The shading on the eye looks a bit out of place, a little bit too glossy. The lady bug as a whole could use a good motion blur to make the render a bit more dynamic. Otherwise, great stem and excellent background choice.

SkyBlue77 · January 9, 2013, 2:02pm

Here is another update, I’m still working on the materials on the bug itself.

XeroShadow · January 9, 2013, 2:28pm

Quite the improvement.

SkyBlue77 · January 12, 2013, 12:52pm

Here’s another update.

jrossjr79 · January 12, 2013, 11:48pm

Looking really good now