hi every one this is my new work i need some crtitcs to improve it
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Hey there.
Your render looks good, but there are a few things you can improve.
- Some of the edges on a few objects can be smoothened out to give a more realistic look.
- Chair models need more rough edges.
- Use an HDRI if you’re willing to sacrifice extra render time for some realism.
- Add a baseboard to the walls.
- Add more assets to the scene.
These are just a few examples of what you can do with your scene.
Hope this helps.
Picture 1
I would definitely add an image outside of the windows so it doesn’t look white
Try adding a light fixture above the dining table. It may give a nice focal point, plus it’s a little more realistic to have lighting on a table.
I would personally desaturate the material on the door and the window trim. Right now the window trim really stands out.
Picture 2
Your paintings are a little high above the sofa. Think about placing them at eye height.
I would try to add more light in the second photo (the living room). It looks a little dark. Also is the ceiling supposed to be black in the ceiling pop-up?
Try adding a coffee table or side table. A rug would be nice too.
Picture 3
Add a hood above the cooktop . Also typically kitchen have a recessed kick under the base cabinets. They don’t go down to the floor.
The handles on the upper cabinets seem a little too high for people to use. Try lowering them.
Picture 4
The accent lights are nice. How about adding them on all the steps? Also consider making the color temperature cooler. It’s reading like a candlelight.
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