Jake "Razor" Clawson ( SWAT Kats : The Radical Squadron )

My last project.


Feel free to comment if you hadn’t seen the WIP before.

The blue color needs to be darker and the head seems to be small compared to the rest of its body.

Hmmm. The sculpting is good and I kinda like the more realistic proportion take of the character. The pose though is too stiff especially the tail. Try giving him a pose that has more character.

Too stiff.

I used to love the SWAT cats and this is a really nice rendition of Razor.
I wouldn’t express it as unceremoniously as JustWandering but yeah the pose is a bit stiff, especially the tail. If you could give the tail a bit of a swing it will probably look better.

There are more replies that I excpected.

@XeroShadow: Yeah you’re sureley right about the head, it’s slightly too small yet. The problem with hair is that as soon as you move a vert you have to rework it again a bit. It’s not so shocking I imagine, I maybe tempted to let it like that.

@ToshiG: Glad you remember that show. I never knew what were those big black blocks in there suits, I replaced them with bags… it has more sense. So okay the most general comment is on the pose that is too stiff. I will try something with the tail and maybe the position of the back, I don’t know.

Thanks for all your comments. I’ll make another render soon.