Jasmine Flower

[khalidsrri (Muhammad Khaled)]

Hi
This is a look at Damascus from Qasioun mountain …
Need some feedback

[bat3a]

beautiful tree.

-the grass on the ground is too green, give it a hint of yellow.
-the bees V line sucks the realism from it.

but the tree is good.

[Adam_Szablewski]

Awesome work. And I think that the grass is to green too. And you could make it slightly less glossy as well.

[mik.a]

From some image search seems like the leaves need to be bigger compared to the flowers, around 2x; the bark texture is more smooth and dark; i agree with previous comments about grass. There is some kind of “banding” on the blurred background…

[khalidsrri (Muhammad Khaled)]

@bat3a

-the grass on the ground is too green, give it a hint of yellow.

Thank you for your feedback …
Good point , I will take care about that …

@bat3a

-the bees V line sucks the realism from it.

It’s birds , Maybe I must change its position …

@Adam Szablewski

Awesome work. And I think that the grass is to green too. And you could make it slightly less glossy as well.

Good point , Thank you

@mik1190

From some image search seems like the leaves need to be bigger compared to the flowers, around 2x; the bark texture is more smooth and dark; i agree with previous comments about grass. There is some kind of “banding” on the blurred background…

There are many type of jasmine flowers , Yes must of them has a big leaves .
However you are right it must be more green and smooth …
I will reconsider about the leaves , Thank you