Made this Fooh video https://youtube.com/shorts/NUpeu1aECWE in couple of weeks of work, i think that the result can be better but i dont have enough time. Love to have your feedback.
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Great video but if you change these things, it’d cool;
1- Video looks straight. Add more saturation. The lightning of objects you created and lightning of the scene does not match perfectly. Add a little composition to scene. Ä°t looks great
2- Before dryers etc goes into store, make them a bit messy. Because the scene before, they come messy, but in last scene they come organised.
In first scene dryers are going to the left and in second scene they appear from the left. This distorts the sense of direction and is generally not used in films.
The rule also applies to the movement of a character as the “line” created by the path of the character. For example, if a character is walking in a leftward direction and is to be picked up by another camera, the character must exit the first shot on frame left and enter the next shot frame right.
Thanks for your feedback, Metehan! You’re absolutely right, with a little more composition it would have looked more professional, but the project has been submitted against my will, hahaha. It probably would have been more coherent if they had been equally disorganized in the final shots.
Thank you very much!
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Thanks for your feedback. That Wikipedia article is very interesting; I’ll try to apply it to future projects!
Thanks very much, mate!