Hi guys,
Heres my latest effort. Tell me your honest opinion.
Thanks and don’t be afraid post your critque,
Bill
Hi guys,
Heres my latest effort. Tell me your honest opinion.
Thanks and don’t be afraid post your critque,
Bill
You might have set the SSS too high. Tone it down. The lips look odd. You might wanna tweak it more to look right. You seem to be using polygon hair here, I don’t know how but you need to fix the hair texture. The eyebrows and eyelashes also needs editing.
@ Icey-cooley,
Perfect, thanks for the comments. You know, you spend so much time with your project and you fall in love with it, and that is the time when you need some ones opinion. Thanks for the comments.
Bill
I know the feeling. When I get to that point I work on something else for a few days and come back to it later. I find that when I get back to it I can spot the flaws right away.
Mostly same as what Icey-cooley was saying. SSS too high, the upper lip comes to a sharp point in the middle. Its hard to tell with the SSS, but the ridge on the nose might a little flat. Its also hard to tell from the picture if you are using the particle system for eyelashes. If you are then the upper eyelashes are too straight and need to curve more. Combing them forward more then turning the end control points on and combing them up can work quite well, assuming then don’t have a lot of segments. Compare the neck texture to the face. The neck looks good, but the face texture looks lumpy, especially the forehead.
Hope that helps more than it confuses.