Made this for a weekend challenge, here.
I probably won’t change it since I have other projects to do but for educational purposes I’d like your ideas and suggestions on how to make it better. I didn’t put this is Focused Critiques since there is no focus, advice about any aspect is welcome, and it is a 2 to 4 hour quick one for a challenge.
Concept
These objects have been appearing all over the world. Each is unique. Each appears, remains for a while, then vanishes. They don’t do anything and have never caused any trouble. People react to them differently. Few will approach closely. Lina is curious, feels comfortable around them, and will even touch them.
Elements
To mix the ferly (strange, unexpected) with the ordinary:
- Square aspect ratio.
- Outdoor scene.
- Ordinary clothes and hair.
- The object is pristine.
The title makes Lina the focus but the object is centered in the picture.
That she is barefoot in a field could be ferly. Unintentional. Shoes are hard model.
The particle grass puts the object and Lina “in the world”. Without that they appear to be on a painted flat surface.
The relaxed pose and touching the object shows that she is unafraid and curious.
The hdri provided this view or another with a forest nearby. The forest could represent emerging from the familiar to explore the unknown. This view can represent that exploring the unknown gives an open future.
B3.6. Cycles render.
- Blocks and Ball is something I modeled a long time ago. Used in this challenge .
- Lina is a genesis 8 character from DAZ. Her clothes are also from DAZ.
- HDRI is lilienstein_8k.hdr from polyhaven.com CC0.
- Grass is a particle system.
I originally thought of her name as Lee-nuh but later it became Line-ah.