Matchbox Car

Artwork Works in Progress
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Ok, I am attempting to put my work out here as a Work in progress. I am going for a boy scouts matchbox car look.

Here is a link to a really crappy looking page that has my renders on it :wink:
Please gimme some constructive criticism.

I personally dont think the wheels look right. (The need to be more smooth!!) But, I can’t figure out how to do 'em!

http://www22.brinkster.com/colinb/car.html

Thanks!

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Not too bad for a first shot. The shadows could use some work, and yes, the wheels don’t look right- but since I’ve never actually seen a matchbox car (I lived a deprived childhood) I cannot really give too much comment or credit.

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looks good, but i believe you mean “pine wood derby car”