My first car

Artwork Finished Projects
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Hi. :cool: I’m from Brazil and this is my first car in Blender. :smiley:

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Pretty good car but there might be a couple of topology issues causing the crinkliness around the back fender. I realize you are finished with this one, but if you want a couple of crits, post a wireframe.
(edit) just notices it’s your first post, so welcome to BlenderArtists! :yes:

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OK! Thank you! :slight_smile:

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Great first car; I like the style, the almost cartoonish look is appealing.

Couple of points:

  1. The curves need smoothing out; in other places too, but the contrast with the white background makes it very noticeable.

  2. Looks like it needs rounding more - the centre of the window is a slight point; similar to one curve it more.

  3. Same as 2.

  4. The way the light reflects from the seem makes it look odd.

  5. The curve where the headlight meets the body is uneven; the opposite headlight is nice and smooth. It’s a focal point, and it’s very obvious. The problem is, if it’s meant to look like that then the other errors call into question if it’s deliberate or not. :slight_smile:

For me, there is too much white background.