I would really appreciate your opinion and suggestions to help me improve my skills
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Welcome! Congrats on your first low-poly render, looks like a fun piece to make
Some feedback since you asked:
Lighting - Looks to be either early morning or early evening based on the light temperature but the shadows are too short for either, and if it’s meant to be mid-day then the light temperature is too red.
Quick fix: Either change the sun color or change the sun angle! Also using and HDRI is always a good way to get some nice lighting in there instead of relying on only the sun lamp.
Composition - I assume the fisherman is meant to be the focal point but since he is placed in the bottom left corner he is easy to miss at first glance. Since the center is a fairly big open space your eyes struggle to find something to focus on.
A quick fix would be to center the camera on the fisherman (or perhaps the fish) and clean up the area around them to guide the viewers eyes there!
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Thank you!
I featured you on BlenderNation, have a great weekend!