My first project - Blacksmith

Hello everyone! After around a month of learning/practicing in blender, I’ve decided I wanted to make a somewhat
detailed scene, before this I’ve mostly practiced single objects (Apples, bottles, animal models and so on).
Never textured anything, just purely the models so this was a big step for me.

This project is not fully done yet, but after working on it for around 4 days I’m somewhat satisfied with the
results. Lots of work left obviously and any advice will be noted down right away. Btw in total there are 47k verts.

Things I want to change/improve:
Fire needs to be added to the forge.
More tools.
Brick texture doesn’t connect properly.

If you agree/disagree please let me know, every little bit of advice is greatly appreciated.

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Hi,not bad for a first scene!
I think the bricks look rather good. There’s a lot of sharp edges, i’d bevel those. Especially on the anvil and the fireplace.
Lighting needs some work too. It’s quite flat now (obviously it’s going to change once you add the fire).

Keep it up!

I agree with Sammy1973 - Looking good for a first scene and the lighting being flat.
I also feel it is lacking composition. It has the feeling of some who just walked up to it and took a quick snap shot using a point-and-shoot camera. I would look at a couple other camera views. Also, drop the floating hammer. Without a character holding it, it is out of place. One last thing, if you look on line, you will find that a lot of blacksmiths have a wood (chuck of tree trunk, or some other solid wooden structure) base under the anvil instead of concrete.

keep going. Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.

Hello, thanks for the advice. I fully agree that a lot of edges still need to be bevel’d. Concerning the bricks, the texture itself isn’t whats bothering me, but that at the corner it doesn’t look like a corner, more like the texture is just bending over. Sadly I have no clue how to fix it without editing the textures and stuff like that.

I’ll try to lay the hammer down on the anvil next to the horse shoe, that might make it more believable.
Still need to do a bunch of research on composition, hopefully I can apply it rather quickly.

About the base under the anvil, I actually knew that most blacksmiths use some sort of wood, but I just felt like that’d be a pretty good place for some basic tools, with a tree trunk you can’t really put anything there. Might not make sense but I still like it :smiley:
And most importantly, thanks for giving me advice as well :slight_smile:

I guess it’s time for a quick update.
What I’ve changed:
No more floating tools.
Bevel’d a bunch of sharp edges.
Added fire. (still need to add coal x.x)
Worked a bit on lighting, I added a sun to the left side of the image.
Added a waterbucket, because why not. :smiley:

Thats about it.
Further advice is welcomed as always! :slight_smile:

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Really interesting link, I’ll definitely save that for future reference, but at the moment I don’t really want to go that in depth.

I’ll try to play around with the colors some more, but I think I’m fine with calling the project “done”.
Don’t want to stick to one project forever, already started on a new one which is going to be a classroom.

Thanks a lot for your comment! :slight_smile:

A suggestion regarding lighting - What if you darkened the scene and allowed the glow of the fire and the horseshoe show off more? It feel it would add more mood to the scene.

Hi I don’t normally comment on stuff,but I feel it would be unfair of me if I didn’t comment,
firstly anvils are never put onconcrete, they are either on a metal frame or large block of wood,its to take the shock. I am a blacksmith, retired.

Ok next are you right handed or lefthanded, depending on which, depends on your anvil position, by theway the hammer is laying I say your right handed, turn the anvil sothe bick, the pointy end is facing the forge if you leave it there.The bick is heavily used.

Also pretend you got an anvil, and aforge, now stand and think, you want to do the least movement fromthe forge to the anvil, basically you only really want to do onequarter turn, most a half turn. Getting the job on to the anvil whilethe heat is still hot is important.

Water, most forges have a water troughat one end, its how we control the heat in the job, they large,normal dark, and rusty, great place to hide beer as an apprentice.

The chimney hood wouldn’t have beensupported at the front, that gets in the way of moving large bits ofsteel around. Also it is to low, we want to be able to see the workin the fire so we can judge it.

Tools that got used all the time, likeyour favourite hammer and tongs, were normal hung on a bar that wasright on the forge. It meant you could pick up what you neededstraight away, the water trough meant you could cool hot tongs.

Right next is light, actually mostblacksmith shops are quite dimly lit, the reason for this was so wecould see the colours of the steel in the forge, white hot steelready for fire welding also burns extremely quickly and can mess upyour job, so we keep the place fairly dark so we can see the colours.

Grime was a big factor, metal scalewould get everywhere, just think of your skin peeling after beingsunburnt, metal does the same. But saying that, the top of the anvilwas always kept clean, swept after every heat, what I mean is youheat your work up, bash it, tap it, then put back in the fire, sweepthe anvil, you didn’t want the scale getting back on to your workand you certainly didnt want any marks on your anvil face. So allthis double tapping you see was a no no on a anvil face as it couldleave an unwanted mark.

You would have kindle on the forge,that’s for starting a new fire every morning, and a new pile ofcoke to one side to make sure the fire was always at it best quality.Coke burning out causes clinkers and they stick to your work. Whencold go hard as glass.

Most blacksmiths favourite hammers hadburnt handles at the end, basically the work would move and you needto hold it firm while you repositioned the tongs, hammer handle wasthe closest thing. Until your boss caught you and whacked you withit.

The anvil has two holes a square onecalled a hardy hole and round one called the pritchel hole.

One last thing, if your horse shoe isbright red then you would have no bright yellow flames on your fire,burning hot coke once lit doesn’t actually give off big yellowflames like you see in most of the pictures, thats a cold fire, butinstead blues, washed out reds, and depending on what your heatingwill also affect the colour of the flame.

Have a look at Japanese sword maker,you can see his flame only burns yellow when he pokes the fire, alsoyou see him cleaning of the scale, and his very little movement,

Hope some of this helps.

Woah, never expected a real blacksmith to look at my picture! :smiley:
I read through your comment multiple times and I can’t find anything I don’t agree with.
There are many flaws with my picture that need to be fixed, like the concrete base, I never knew why wood was used there, but the shock absorbtion makes so much sense!

My scene needs A LOT of work if I want it to be at a “realistic” level, and a lot of work takes a lot of time.
Right now I don’t really want to invest more time in improving the scene, I’ll primarly focus on my new project. After thats finished I’ll hopefully “re-do” the entire scene.
(I hope you don’t think your advice won’t be used, because it definitely will be!)
Your comment shows a lot of real life experience, that I don’t have, so it’s REALLY helpful, I can’t thank you enough! :slight_smile: