Well horror it is. The train is moving i can see but the monster that is hunting the train seems not be moving. I like the sparks they are very cool. The station is also nice. Maybe you could add some more garbage besides the two bottles to give it more of detail. Finaly i saw that there are text watermarks across your render. I dont know what they are. Nice job.
Too bright. Horror is not about what you can see…it’s about what you can’t.
I agree abut it being darker. It seems on the bright side.
Watermarks are at my name (Instagram account) in order to protect my work. Thank you 
well there is less blur on the monster because it is at the background and perspective is reducing the amount of movement.
Well I’ma darken it
I would suggest using area lamps or an emittor mesh ( cycles ). If you use one, you can turn off it’s visibility by going to object buttons >> visibility >> ray visibility >> uncheck “camera”
I’m using cycles and only the sparks and neon lights are lighting the scene. I just have to lower the neon light emission