I personally think that the only thing that is “objectionable” about this picture is the smoke. Knock the opacity down by about three-fourths and maybe find a way to add a “blur” that applies only to it. You can “diddle” with everything else as you wish, but this is the only thing that to my eye really “kills the shot.”
I will try to fix the opacity
The glass is too narrow at the bottom. It looks like it’s going to collapse any minute.
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Thanx a lot