Need critique on this scene

I’m trying to make a scene of a dream I once had. Don’t hold back.

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What is the story, what do you want the viewer to feel?

look great …
i think its missing an environment atmosphere fog or somethings …
and the sunlight isnt appering on the wood things

I don’t understand what it is, but the water is nice. The wood texture is too much repeating and perhaps a little bit too big. Same problem with concrete texture. Finally less bump would look better.