The next phase is get a 2 or 3 shot 15 second animation going but I would love to know where this scene can improve before I do that to give it a more realistic feel.
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Hi there!
First thing catching my eye is your brick wall. The bricks look too small and a bit distorted to me, you might as well ad displacement, since it´s close to the camera.
Then some of the proportions look a bit off. Are that wheels under the A-box? The dustbin mesh is too big, as well as the chairs, the shoes and the side window look too small and the window is just sitting on top of the wall instead of being “build in”.
The material of the desk looks a bit dull.
A baseboard as an additional detail might help the room as well.
I like the lightning and the carpet!
Cheers and keep going… 
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Thank you for the great advice! I used a human base mesh in the beginning as a reference, but I guess I should have kept referencing it because I am now just realizing how the size proportion are out of wack. I’m gonna make updates to all of these