New Start on my Human Model

Artwork Focused Critiques
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So, I was almost finished retopo-ing this head when I decided to refine the sculpt. Originally I was using photos of 3 different people for reference, and decided to settle on just one as I refine it. I think it has a lot more character now. Any crits would be appreciated. (edit) replaced 1st image with current one

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(edit) this eye is going to be very tedious to make blinking actions for. if anybody has any ideas about that i’d be interested to hear them.
(edit) also, I just noticed that the forehead is to tall, so I will be fixing that.

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I am making the mouth semi-open, with the intent of leaving the edges free, so that I can then model an open mouth with teeth on the retopod result. I am concerned though, about how well things will fit together when completely closed.

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I fixed the crown / forehead, which was too tall…

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well, I decided the general proportions were in need of adjustment, so I decimated it, did some drastic proportional editing on it, shaved some mass off here and there, so, back to refining it…will post once it’s in a more polished state.

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Looking good so far!

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thanks. here is the current shape…probably can’t tell much difference, but there are actually some fairly drastic adjustments to the overall form.

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Hey Modron, long time no talk, hope you doing good.

Not a hellofalot wrong here, looking really good.

The only thing that I notice is that the eyes may be a tiny bit small and at the moment she looks like she is scowling.

Looking forward to updates.

Shaun

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It looks like a pretty girl so nothing to point :slight_smile:
But she looks mad , there’s something about the eyebrows / eyes … don’t know what exactly , sorry.

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Thanks guys. Here is the latest progress.

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Post a front and a side view, like to get a good look at the ears.

Shaun

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You need to get the lobe more round and also there is a definite separation as it meets the jawline. have a look at this pic.


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some peoples lobes are not free hanging. originally it was free hanging, but I changed it to reflect my reference.